Comments on: Fish Bowl-A Poem

By: Jas

Jas — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 06:27:45 +0000

hi i would like to ask ur permission to use your peom for a charity know as the grey man. The grey man is a charity that helps prevent child slavery in thailand. WE coordinate bust with tai police and give resouces to the villages being targeted. we would like to use ur poem in some promotional material.

By: savanna

savanna — Mon, 01 Sep 2008 20:52:46 +0000

man that peom was depressing but i think wat u r doing to try to convince people it isnt history and that we should try to stop it is a great idea i fully support ur efforts!!!

By: JWT

JWT — Thu, 06 Sep 2007 05:11:48 +0000

Sandy, I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re saying. What wage system have we violently forced on the world? I understand that we’re all connected financially, that is certainly obvious. I want to understand the wage system you’re referring to.

By: Sandy Bartone

Sandy Bartone — Wed, 05 Sep 2007 16:35:03 +0000

This child slavery is caused by the USA’s wage system which we’ve been violently forcing on the whole world. If we end the wage system here, it would soon force all nations to do the same because all nations are connected financially, which should be obvious to all by now. Also, USA should have eliminated all work by building Tower Cities connected to maglev Trains, not automobiles, small buildings, etc.

By: JWT

JWT — Sun, 02 Sep 2007 06:14:26 +0000

Gail, there is a lot more that needs to be said and done, so thank you for the encouragement!

By: GAIL

GAIL — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 12:52:08 +0000

THIS WEBSITE TOUCHED ME IN A WAY NONE OTHER HAS. I WAS UNAWARE OF THE ONGOING ISSUES THAT EFFECT OTHER COUNTRIES, THANK YOU FOR THIS WEBSITE.

By: tuttysan

tuttysan — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 05:01:30 +0000

This reminded me of a book I read by Paulo Coehlo “Eleven”; the tales of a Brazilian prostitute in Holland. I wonder what goes through their head, man after man.

By: JWT

JWT — Sat, 05 May 2007 04:33:06 +0000

Powerful and disturbing. Thank you.